With these romance rewrites, I have to find my way into the new story that I'm grafting onto the original. I stare at panel after panel until one finally offers up the dialogue that should be there, and then I start building the story around that one. Here's the one from the latest ROMANCE REDUX that made it clear that the guy was going to be obsessed with diner food. Having just mentioned Karl Kesel two posts ago, I completely forgot that I'd named the couple in the story Karl and Myrna after Karl and his wife.